The Twilight Saga

In my MiNd..

 

I thought about a new story and I liked the idea it’s about edward before he met bella we know that edward is a mind reader so this story is about what he listens in the people mind  it’s like his dairy there might be many different characters  so I hope you like it , if you like the idea please comment and I’ll post the first chapter..

 

 

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This looks quite interesting. I'm curious to see how this turns out. U should definitely write this. Please keep me updated. If you are interested
The beginning of a new life
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i'll post it now thanks for your comment
Chapter 1 ( it’s just a start ):



(( what should I buy??... I don’t believe that he didn’t even call that jerk … what should I choose the red one or the green one? …. I hate het ,How could she forget my birthday ? ))

It’s really getting me crazy listening to everyone thoughts everybody is thinking and thinking and more thinking it’s driving me crazy it’s like everyone is talking to me at the same moment and there is no any interesting thoughts all of them are silly being able to read people’s mind let me know who they are , they are mean or kind , silly or smart but I kinda hate it .
‘so I was thinking about going to a trip’ alice said , I was in the mall with alice , she asked me to help her in planning for esma’s surprise birthday party and I said yes it’s not fun but at least it’s something to do.

‘ a trip?!’ that’s a good idea

‘ya , a trip for all of us’ (( it won’t take too long to prepare for it , we will only buy five tickets for ….for where ?? .. oh maybe new York ))

‘ alice you mean seven tickets , you said that all of us are going’

‘all of us are going but esma and Carlisle’

‘ok ,so what you will buy for esma ?’

‘I don’t know’ ((maybe a new car or a beautiful earring…-))

‘I don’t think that esma need a new car’

‘you know esma better than me , what does she love?’

‘Carlisle’

‘ no I mean something we can buy’

‘I have an idea, what if we bought two tickets for esma and Carlisle to Paris , I think that she will love it’

Alice stood there with her eyes opened wide she was having a vision , I saw esma in the vision she was very happy about our gift.

‘you are right she will love it’ Alice said after she came back to the real world.

‘so I’ll go and buy the tickets’

‘ok you will buy the tickets and I’ll go and buy a dress’

‘ok .. see you later’

‘bye’

I didn’t take too long to find the travel company , there weren’t many people there just two girls they look like a 17 or 18 years old and there were a guy with a little kid . the man was waiting for someone ..

(( when she will come ?? … I’m sitting here from an hour)) poor guy.

((oh my god he looks so hot , I hope that he’s single should I go and talk to him )) oh I hate it when they have those thoughts

‘sally look there’ she was talking about me

‘OMG.. he’s …. I don’t know there’s no any word can describe it’ I really was being so uncomfortably so I bought the tickets quickly . I bought two tickets to Paris a vacation for a week.

I went to my car and found Alice waiting for me .

No one was home Carlisle was at work , jasper and Emmett were hunting and esma and rose were shopping.

We didn’t take too long Alice is really good at making parties all we have to do now is calling everyone but esma ….

hope you like it

this is good!
post more soon!!!!
thanks for the comment .. i'll post more soon
Cool!! I love it :)
You are on the right track. Update soon!
thanks and i'm glad that you loved it
You are welcome dear :)
Sounds like a good idea!
thanks ...
LOVED IT!!!!!!!

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