The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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Now the fun starts it
i have no idea
love it
more plz
i think sh eis at the place where sh e meets edward
hurry up
oh my gosh!!
i love the chapter!!
and i think she is going boxing!!!!
please keep me updated!!!
love shauny
love it!!that was fab!!
love it more plz
hurry What will Bella do?? more ASAP
omg, cliffieee nooooooo post!!!!!

Ch.4 "Oh Bella you dont even know what were doing!" Necole said getting out the car. I unbulcked my seat belt and got out following behind Necole.We walked into the small building seeing 3 guys sitting down hands tied behind their backs,blind folded and shirtless.

"If this is your little suprise im not doing it." I whispered in Necole's ear.

"Bella you have to know how to kiss a boy right." She looked at me.

"What does this have to do with me being mean?" I asked.

"Oh,that was just to get you out the house, if i said hey Bella im taking you to learn how to kiss some boys,would you have come?" She asked already knowing the answer.

I sighed. "No."

"Ok then just enjoy yourself,your gonna use this one day in life." She turned back around and walked over to girl with fire red hair. I walked toward them.

"So this must be Bella." The red head said. "I'm Victoria." She smiled. I shook her hand. "So are you ready to start?" She asked.

"Um i guess." I said figuaring this was the only way i was going to be able to get back home.

"Great!" She exclaimed. "Well first pick one of the guys sitting in the chairs." She said pointing to them.

"The one in the middle." I answered not really caring.

"Ok So i want you to go up there and kiss him like you did it a million times before." She said. I nodded. I didnt know what to do,i havent kissed anyone before let along a million times.

I walked up to him slowly. I looked at him for a min. He had the most beautiful lips i ever saw. I leaned down and slowly pressed my lips to his. My mind wasnt in control anymore my lips were. Who knew a kiss like this could be so wonderful. As are lips and tongue touched i felt something around my waist pulling me closer to him. It was his hands. Somehow he had unfreed his hands.

"Ok thats enough." Victoria said. And i pulled away. I walked back over to were she stood. She smirked.

"Ok next your gonna slap him now." She said.

"What? why?" I asked,i didnt want to slap him.

"Your at a party and he wonders off, you go to look for him and you see him cheating on you with your bestfriend!" She said.

I wasnt sure about this. So i walked up to the guy i just shared my first kiss with and whispered "Im sorry." All though i couldnt see his eyes i had a feeling they had sad in them. I raised my hand up and slapped him light as i could.

"Harder! He Cheated on you with your BESTFRIEND!!" Victoria yelled.

So i slapped him harded as i could. His Cheek was red! "Im really Sorry! She making me do this to you!" I whispered.
His lips turned into a very small smile.

"Ok thats all for tonight!" Victoria said clapping her hands together.

"Alright Victoria,will see you tomorrow right same time?" Necole asked speaking for the first time in a while.

"Yupp!" She answered.

Once we were in the car Necole started talking.

"So how was your first kiss?" She asked excitedly.

"It was ok." I lied. It was amazing! I wish i could kiss him forever!

"You liar! It didnt look like it was just ok." She objected. I didnt say anything. It was quite the rest of the way home.

"Ok i'll see ya tomorrow night." She called as i got out the car to shut the door.

I ate,showered,washed my face, painted my nails and i even order some more clothes. It was 11pm now my bed time.
Oh boy! This was the best day ever! I got my first kiss and i actually get to sleep in today! I think i'm to excited to close my eyes!

Ok i hope you guys enjoyed this chapter ill update soon!! Please tell me what you think and Comment!!!

omg i feel so bad for bella cause she had to slap him but alright bella she got her first kiss nice


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